Pretty neat. I would just change some minor things like: i would repeat the vocal part from 00:28 to 00:40 once more with just a simple change like drums/strings or something and then get a huge drop in while keeping it related to a 4/4 beat. Just my opinion.
Dude you're king, and I say that very rarely.
I personally think, that the kick is too hard for the lead and the changes seem weird at some points but all together its nice.
:D thanks for your review :D
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